the shootout

2013-10-27 1156 0 4 Rating: 3.2

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a short film just made for the kids while i was learning some vfx

Reviews 4

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bmsproductions Said: 2014-01-16 07:52:52
Rating: 3

Title: Kids with guns....... Nice

Pros: It has kids with guns.

Cons: You should have made them Mexican or Colombian drug lords.

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RCstudioz Said: 2013-11-20 07:08:52
Rating: 3

Title: So-So

Pros: Nice Stock for the FX, Action Essentials?

Cons: LEARN TRACKING! It`s pretty easy to learn and it`ll add so much more authenticity to your gunshots and especially the car window breaking. The acting wasn`t too great but hey they`re kids what do you expect at the age? And maybe try to not follow the kid as much so we know the camera is there. More static shots and close-up will do you good.

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pondi Said: 2013-11-03 09:04:05
Rating: 3

Title: Nice start

Pros: it`s a nice starting point. The hits on the ground were pretty good

Cons: The flares weren`t perfect and the video was way to shaking

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rider450r Said: 2013-10-27 18:43:39
Rating: 4

Title: the shootout

Pros: what you think i was learning some vex

Cons: shot on an iPhone 5 s

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