The Juggler

2013-07-10 910 0 2 Rating: 1.5

Description

A Juggler is disturbed by an annoying passerby

Reviews 2

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TheMovieMan100 Said: 2013-07-17 15:18:45
Rating: 1

Title: THE JUGGLER

Pros: Good music.

Cons: The acting is pretty bad. It`s dumb, boring, and it`s just really painful to watch.

Other Thoughts: The bad acting would have worked in this video if the video itself was funny. But instead of being funny, it`s just stupid.

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michaelduck Said: 2013-07-15 21:07:48
Rating: 2

Title: Good Use of B&W

Pros: The Music and use of B&W was a nice touch for this type of film. It fit well. I also like that you kept it silent instead of trying to fit in dialogue when it did not need it. Had a good ending as well.

Cons: I would have liked to see more leading up to where it started. You say in your description that it is a passerby, but there is no indication of that. Having them walk up and then start would have helped set the tone. There was also a part where the main character smiled when he should not have. Either redoing that shot or cutting away a second sooner would have helped.

Other Thoughts: Nice film overall. It was obviously done with limited resources, but it is not all that obvious since you were able to make it silent and B&W. Again, that was a good choice to alleviate some technology gaps you might have had.

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