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On the night of his 40th birthday Arnold takes stock of his life and questions his desire to continue living it.
The pastor of a small church explores boundaries while in pursuit of keeping his family whole.
I young man with a meaningless life has a realistic vision of the future where the lower end of society places bets on how you will die.
A short film we made several months ago about a young man facing a big challenge. We leave it up to the viewer to decide how it ends. This was done with a $0 budget, and with inexperienced actors.
Title: Review/ "Siren"
Pros: I loved the opening and felt for the character. Good editing and interesting use of filters. I loved you used available light and let the grain set the mood. I loved the contrast of the two locations. Interesting story concept. Actors were ok. Loved the ending. Good editing.
Cons: In the beginning I am drawn in with the mood of the opening scenes, then the dialogue, music and then titles. It was too much and I lost focus. Sirens voice was not balanced and I had to strain to hear her.
Other Thoughts: I would have loved to have seen the final scene in Black and White. One sticking point .... a man wakes up from a very beautiful dream then wakes up with proof he was there. HHHmmm.