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Our first post here so how about our first video on YouTube from 2 years ago. A short about two photographers out to "Shoot" each other.
a short film just made for the kids while i was learning some vfx
Ryan & his mentor Bill, are on a mission to visit the home a young girl named "Ellie". Ellie is considered to be the "Boss`s precious gift of life" & is expected to return "home" to the Boss.
Title: shoot out
Pros: I really liked the cinematography. good job.
Cons: didnt like the concept. you guys should write a real story and shoot it like this one, then i think you will have a winner.
Title: Solid FX, great idea.
Pros: The FX and look overall were great. I enjoyed the standoff.
Cons: The story was confusing right away, then I understood it more towards the end. Camera was also too shaky throughout.
I like the girl showing up in the end, but I`d suggest ending with the final picture falling rather than watching the girl walk away. She was never established and it was jarring.
Other Thoughts: Keep it up. Try to incorporate more story and dialogue instead of just FX.
Pros: Editing and vfx were great! Concept was awesome
Cons: a little more story
Pros: cool idea with the cameras as gun. great effect at the end when he got shot and turned into a picture.
Cons: I was a little confused on the story. for example, why were they trying to kill each other?
Other Thoughts: Great idea, maybe just a little bit more of story development.
Title: Fast Paced "Shootout" is Awesome
Pros: First off, awesome idea. I love this kind of originality in a short film. I enjoyed the fast paced feel to it. The effects were really cool, especially when someone was "shot." The music and character actions went really well together.
Cons: Some of the shots were a bit shaky and the editing between their transitions could have been a bit smoother. I know that can be difficult in a high energy film like this though.
Other Thoughts: Awesome job.