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Our first post here so how about our first video on YouTube from 2 years ago. A short about two photographers out to "Shoot" each other.
Ryan & his mentor Bill, are on a mission to visit the home a young girl named "Ellie". Ellie is considered to be the "Boss`s precious gift of life" & is expected to return "home" to the Boss.
Video of me and some friends having fun and one of the many beautiful and fun places of AZ. Hope you enjoy!
This is a film i made called the Chase
Title: shoot out
Pros: I really liked the cinematography. good job.
Cons: didnt like the concept. you guys should write a real story and shoot it like this one, then i think you will have a winner.
Title: Solid FX, great idea.
Pros: The FX and look overall were great. I enjoyed the standoff.
Cons: The story was confusing right away, then I understood it more towards the end. Camera was also too shaky throughout.
I like the girl showing up in the end, but I`d suggest ending with the final picture falling rather than watching the girl walk away. She was never established and it was jarring.
Other Thoughts: Keep it up. Try to incorporate more story and dialogue instead of just FX.
Pros: Editing and vfx were great! Concept was awesome
Cons: a little more story
Pros: cool idea with the cameras as gun. great effect at the end when he got shot and turned into a picture.
Cons: I was a little confused on the story. for example, why were they trying to kill each other?
Other Thoughts: Great idea, maybe just a little bit more of story development.
Title: Fast Paced "Shootout" is Awesome
Pros: First off, awesome idea. I love this kind of originality in a short film. I enjoyed the fast paced feel to it. The effects were really cool, especially when someone was "shot." The music and character actions went really well together.
Cons: Some of the shots were a bit shaky and the editing between their transitions could have been a bit smoother. I know that can be difficult in a high energy film like this though.
Other Thoughts: Awesome job.