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A girl breaks up with a guy. He tries to save the relationship with a time traveling mechanism he finds.
The marriage of Charlie and Brooke is riddled with objections. Can this wedding ceremony get completed? Watch to see.
A silent film character is brought into the real world, in the 21st century.
Title: A nice film
Pros: *You`re very confident with everything. I can tell. The acting is pretty good, the music is enjoyable, and everything all around is pretty good.
*The story is enjoyable.
*It`s so cute!
Cons: *I thought that the editing was a little too quick. In the beginning, especially. I want to enjoy everything that`s going on in the film. If it cuts every 2 or 3 seconds, it`s a little hard to do that. Plus, the whole beginning scene is supposed to be dramatic, right? Keep a shot going, show the little emotions that the actors convey with their facial expressions. You don`t have to only show them speaking. Let them react to what other people are saying, let the audience see them. Acting is reacting. Reactions are what makes characters in films enjoyable. Based on who they are, what their personality is like, that`s how they react to the world and the people around them.
Title: Great Job!
Pros: Good Color Grade if any. Liked the feel of the short. Great twist too.
Cons: Some of the angles were too centered, if they were off a bit, might have gave a more expensive film feel.
Other Thoughts: Really enjoyed it!