Nightmares

2013-07-26 1158 0 2 Rating: 4.0

Description

this is a short horror/comedy about three friends who watch a scary movie and then later they have strange nightmares

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TheMovieMan100 Said: 2013-07-30 21:50:59
Rating: 5

Title: NIGHTMARES

Pros: It was scary, funny, clever, original, and the laugh track was a great touch.

Cons: None.

Other Thoughts: Please make a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My suggestion for a sequel would be to make it about all of the same characters but this time there watching a different horror movie.

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Michael Duck Said: 2013-07-28 20:05:13
Rating: 3

Title: Good Concept

Pros: The concept was good and some of the camera shots were well executed. The acting was also good and not distracting in many of the scenes.

Cons: I think a tripod would have helped in some of the scenes. I feel that the handheld was overdone. Specifically in the couple of scenes close to the couch when someone pans over to see them sleeping. It was jerky. Some of the sound was a little subpar as well. This could be the placement of the microphone. I did not think the audience laugh track was needed. I think it took away from the film. Some of the scenes this was used were humorous enough to make the use of it distracting. Finally, you should look into color correction. I think this will help the look of your films a lot and give them the mood you are going for.

Other Thoughts: Overall, I think the concept was good and there is room for improvement on the execution.

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