Motivation

2013-07-10 1064 0 2 Rating: 3.5

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A man wishes to leave his life as a contracted hit man for an unknown benefactor. Cast: David Huckabay Director: Kyle Gilmore

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NathanLIONMiguel Said: 2013-07-25 14:47:10
Rating: 3

Title: no action?

Pros: very well made with the camera work and music. very good actor.

Cons: i personally would have liked to see his assignment in action

Other Thoughts: overall good job on this

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Michael Duck Said: 2013-07-13 21:34:27
Rating: 4

Title: Nicely Executed (no pun intended)

Pros: I thought this was a good execution on a common story. The actor held his own and I thought the music went well with the pacing. The camera angles were also good and did not distract. I also really liked the color of the overall film. Everything tied together nicely.

Cons: A couple of moments seemed a little forced for the actor. The bathroom scene did a little and some of the dialogue on the phone. I would also liked to have seen a slow push toward him on the phone when the conversation of his family came up. I think this might have added a little more emotion to what he was going through.

Other Thoughts: Good job and I could see watching a longer version of this.

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